Kiritsugu
10-25-2007, 02:54 PM
Username: Kiritsugu
GENERAL
Name: Jin Yaoi
Gender: Male
Age: 17
School: Higashi High
School Clubs:
* None
* None
* None
Skill Stats:
* Stamina: 10.
Strength: 8(-2)
Defense:7(-3)
Speed: 15(+5)
Total Skill Points: 40.
Status: F-class
Road: Infinitus Umbra (Infinite Shadow)
This road originally belongs to my older brother(read about him below) who was for so far according to my knowledge the only follower of Infinite Shadow, in fact he was the one that first founded the road as well. The Infinitus Umbra itself is kinda a offspring of flame road, at least some basics are same, well it uses the friction that is created from the wheels and creates smoke, which can be used to cover the rider and blind the opponent, an experienced rider of this road being used to be in smoke has sharpened his other senses(by other i mean other than eyesight) other to see things in smoke basic stats would be stamina and speed, well a fair share of strength is also needed but it wont affect the preformance of the rider too greatly. There are various tricks on this road, but the main purpose is to create a smoke cover or even completely cover a small are in smoke, thus decreasing other riders ability to sense danger normally, and to allow to attack unexpectedly, also top riders can even make themselves invisible to the eye in the smoke.
(please be kind and comment it expecting some criticism)
A-T Information: I usually ride on normal A-T's they are plain looking in whole they are black but they do have a blue stripe along the bottom of it and wheels well there is a red pentagram on the sides
But I do have my brothers A-T in my possession, but I am way to inexperienced to ride them(they aren't regalia, just some expensive ****, which makes Infinite Shadow road easier to ride)(and about my brother read about it below)
LOOKS
(insert picture URL here; optional)(mabey later)
Eye Colour: Blue
Hair Colour: Black
Skin Tone: Light
Height/Weight: 175/70kg
Blood-type: AB
Overall Appearance: In overall I go with something dark, don' do T-shirts usually go with the shirts with the buttons and all (still dark) then wear jeans darker colours are prefered, and a dark long black leather coat (kinda looks like a rain coat lol) Oh and i have long hair.
PERSONALITY
Likes:
* Long dark winter nights
* Pretty, Hot, Sexy girls in school uniform
* Rain
Dislikes:
* Being pushed around(what i mean is don't like to be picked on and so on)
* Don't like to wait
* People treating others badly
Hobbies:
* Guitar
* Cars
* A-T?
Fears: My fear is that I wont be able to follow my brothers footsteps and inherit his road
Goals: To challenge kings
Overall Personality: In one word I would be a dark person i.e. would be pretty angered all the time not at others in particular but against the world, well the road is what would describe my personality the best. I'm like a shadow. Lonely and liking it, hate it when one would try to disturb my solitude. And I am not a emo ... wont cry over every single thing .. when something/someone is causing me trouble i wont hesitate to try to remove the obstacle with my own methods.
HISTORY
Birthplace: Europe
Birthdate: March 30th
Birthtime: 2.34 p.m.
Parents: Jack & Saya
Siblings: Older Brother Gin - He is creator of Infinite Shadow road, now retired and present location unknown, He left family when I was in Junior High I used to watch his Battles when I was smaller and he was still riding A-T. I know that there was some kind of argument between him and father about A-T's and that father couldn't accept him as his son anymore so he left to see the world and inherited the shadow road to me (well actually he only gave me his A-T with words take a good care of them so that you could grow up to ride these one day)
Overall History: As stated above born in Europe, my mother was working aboard, when she met my father and they fell in love and married so my mother decided to stay aboard, they kept my mothers last name. Not to long after they got married father made a break through in business and made a fortune (which pretty much means I am a rich spoiled kid), when my brother was born the family was already rich and that allowed him to get to know the A-T world early in EU, I am about 6 years younger than my brother when i was 6 my brother started to do A-T, at first he followed the flame road but then he decided that it is not something for him and followed his own heart, I have been to the battles watching him ride since i was 10... But still My brother didn't want me to ride the A-T because he thought it would be too dangerous to me... we were pretty close(me and my brother)... He was like a Hero to me so that is why I was overjoyed when i heard the words he said when he gave me his A-T... tho my father still didn't allow me to start riding them. When we moved to Tokyo last year I started to slowly learn A-T riding behind my fathers back and here i am now good enough to be a F-class rider and far far far away from my goal to surpass my brother on the Infinite Shadow road.
EXTRA
Extra: Nothing really to put here!!
Roleplay Sample: It is getting late and i still haven't seen my brother at my 10th birthday, I wonder where he could be. I decided to go to my room and do finishing touches on my homework for tomorrow, though its sad that my brother is missing my birthday. Thinking about it makes me sad and disappointed, I mean my own brother forgeting my birthday...
Suddenly i hear some noises on the balcony, I'm thinking its some Burglar, I am scared to death. I take a glimpse on the balcony and i see a Figure standing there. I look away and close my eyes. Then i hear some1 say "don't be scared lil'bro"... "its my brother, Its my brother" I think myself, I am overjoyed by the fact that my brother came after all i run towards him and hug him .. He asks me to go with him to see him battle and ofcourse i agree to go. Thinking myself "I can not belive this this is the best birthday ever I am going to see a A-T battle for the first time in my life"...
so thats that ... please be kind with the criticism i am expecting it tho :P so give it all that you have
EDIT: lols forgot my brothers name!!!! DUHHH
EDIT2: updated age
GENERAL
Name: Jin Yaoi
Gender: Male
Age: 17
School: Higashi High
School Clubs:
* None
* None
* None
Skill Stats:
* Stamina: 10.
Strength: 8(-2)
Defense:7(-3)
Speed: 15(+5)
Total Skill Points: 40.
Status: F-class
Road: Infinitus Umbra (Infinite Shadow)
This road originally belongs to my older brother(read about him below) who was for so far according to my knowledge the only follower of Infinite Shadow, in fact he was the one that first founded the road as well. The Infinitus Umbra itself is kinda a offspring of flame road, at least some basics are same, well it uses the friction that is created from the wheels and creates smoke, which can be used to cover the rider and blind the opponent, an experienced rider of this road being used to be in smoke has sharpened his other senses(by other i mean other than eyesight) other to see things in smoke basic stats would be stamina and speed, well a fair share of strength is also needed but it wont affect the preformance of the rider too greatly. There are various tricks on this road, but the main purpose is to create a smoke cover or even completely cover a small are in smoke, thus decreasing other riders ability to sense danger normally, and to allow to attack unexpectedly, also top riders can even make themselves invisible to the eye in the smoke.
(please be kind and comment it expecting some criticism)
A-T Information: I usually ride on normal A-T's they are plain looking in whole they are black but they do have a blue stripe along the bottom of it and wheels well there is a red pentagram on the sides
But I do have my brothers A-T in my possession, but I am way to inexperienced to ride them(they aren't regalia, just some expensive ****, which makes Infinite Shadow road easier to ride)(and about my brother read about it below)
LOOKS
(insert picture URL here; optional)(mabey later)
Eye Colour: Blue
Hair Colour: Black
Skin Tone: Light
Height/Weight: 175/70kg
Blood-type: AB
Overall Appearance: In overall I go with something dark, don' do T-shirts usually go with the shirts with the buttons and all (still dark) then wear jeans darker colours are prefered, and a dark long black leather coat (kinda looks like a rain coat lol) Oh and i have long hair.
PERSONALITY
Likes:
* Long dark winter nights
* Pretty, Hot, Sexy girls in school uniform
* Rain
Dislikes:
* Being pushed around(what i mean is don't like to be picked on and so on)
* Don't like to wait
* People treating others badly
Hobbies:
* Guitar
* Cars
* A-T?
Fears: My fear is that I wont be able to follow my brothers footsteps and inherit his road
Goals: To challenge kings
Overall Personality: In one word I would be a dark person i.e. would be pretty angered all the time not at others in particular but against the world, well the road is what would describe my personality the best. I'm like a shadow. Lonely and liking it, hate it when one would try to disturb my solitude. And I am not a emo ... wont cry over every single thing .. when something/someone is causing me trouble i wont hesitate to try to remove the obstacle with my own methods.
HISTORY
Birthplace: Europe
Birthdate: March 30th
Birthtime: 2.34 p.m.
Parents: Jack & Saya
Siblings: Older Brother Gin - He is creator of Infinite Shadow road, now retired and present location unknown, He left family when I was in Junior High I used to watch his Battles when I was smaller and he was still riding A-T. I know that there was some kind of argument between him and father about A-T's and that father couldn't accept him as his son anymore so he left to see the world and inherited the shadow road to me (well actually he only gave me his A-T with words take a good care of them so that you could grow up to ride these one day)
Overall History: As stated above born in Europe, my mother was working aboard, when she met my father and they fell in love and married so my mother decided to stay aboard, they kept my mothers last name. Not to long after they got married father made a break through in business and made a fortune (which pretty much means I am a rich spoiled kid), when my brother was born the family was already rich and that allowed him to get to know the A-T world early in EU, I am about 6 years younger than my brother when i was 6 my brother started to do A-T, at first he followed the flame road but then he decided that it is not something for him and followed his own heart, I have been to the battles watching him ride since i was 10... But still My brother didn't want me to ride the A-T because he thought it would be too dangerous to me... we were pretty close(me and my brother)... He was like a Hero to me so that is why I was overjoyed when i heard the words he said when he gave me his A-T... tho my father still didn't allow me to start riding them. When we moved to Tokyo last year I started to slowly learn A-T riding behind my fathers back and here i am now good enough to be a F-class rider and far far far away from my goal to surpass my brother on the Infinite Shadow road.
EXTRA
Extra: Nothing really to put here!!
Roleplay Sample: It is getting late and i still haven't seen my brother at my 10th birthday, I wonder where he could be. I decided to go to my room and do finishing touches on my homework for tomorrow, though its sad that my brother is missing my birthday. Thinking about it makes me sad and disappointed, I mean my own brother forgeting my birthday...
Suddenly i hear some noises on the balcony, I'm thinking its some Burglar, I am scared to death. I take a glimpse on the balcony and i see a Figure standing there. I look away and close my eyes. Then i hear some1 say "don't be scared lil'bro"... "its my brother, Its my brother" I think myself, I am overjoyed by the fact that my brother came after all i run towards him and hug him .. He asks me to go with him to see him battle and ofcourse i agree to go. Thinking myself "I can not belive this this is the best birthday ever I am going to see a A-T battle for the first time in my life"...
so thats that ... please be kind with the criticism i am expecting it tho :P so give it all that you have
EDIT: lols forgot my brothers name!!!! DUHHH
EDIT2: updated age