RPG application

[saniya]

Username:saniya

GENERAL
Name:kuu takamoto
Gender: female
Age:17
School: private
School Clubs: music club,archery club

Skill Stats:
Stamina: 10.
Strength:10
Defense:7
Speed:13
Total Skill Points: 40.

Status: F-class
Road:the bloody road (it allows the rider to create a sword slash wid his skates,the user can slice the enemy in secs but if used to often can harm the user, its speeds its best quality allows the user to in a glimpse make his move like a samurai sword its blows can penetrate through anything...givin extreme thrust at the same time...
A-T Information: black metallic look with dragons as designs...

LOOKS

(http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/4184/girlcopyfv9.jpg)[not tht gud was too sleepy hehe]
Eye Colour:light brown
Hair Colour:brown
Skin Tone: tan
Height/Weight: 5.5inches/45kgs
Blood-type: B+
Overall Appearance: wear a black hooded shirt(dragon on the back:P) with baige half pants

PERSONALITY
Likes: to listen to music and watch the sky
Dislikes: waking up early
Hobbies: hmm reading and listenin to music
Fears: not gettin food:P
Goals:find the true meaning of life
Overall Personality: a dreamer and never back out of a challenge

HISTORY
Birthplace: okinawa
Birthdate: 15/3
Birthtime: 10:30 pm
Parents: out
Siblings:none

Overall History: hmm on request :P well live alone and love to ride A-Ts once i got the hang of it now it feels like i was made for it so lookin for teams to join...since a child being alone made kuu reflect on life and since her parents were never there to look after her or siblings to talk to life seemed depressin only livin it seemed right wasting it was once an option but couldnt come to do that since something kept holding her back...so kept livin but once A-Ts came along it gave her the chance to explore a world tht was new to her and love it more n more it became a drug life seemed much better as it felt she was reachin her meanin in life n so thts how she kept belivein tht there was more to life.she likes the way her life is now atlest her life is now goin somewhere n this thrill keepin her from dreamin of a better future...she too realistic and can really give u hell..loves to be quiet but likes to make sarcastic jokes..

EXTRA
Extra: um parents both workaholics so lifes gud flyin solo...hmm i guess the rest is not too interestin (the airtreck histroy yet to be discovered)

Roleplay Sample: walkin near a park at night a guy passes wid a smile and vanishes the joy in his eyes could be seen
suddenly hes infornt of me talkin to me as if he knows me and talks abt airtrecks lost as i am i keep wonderin but then he says sth i cannot forget
"dont u wanna seek a deeper meanin in life?".......leavin airtrecks with the same exact pic as my hoodie and there awesome but didnt understand the whole meanin of this
so think of tryin them out the feeling of ridin on airtrecks is awesome:P its since then tht this interest kept buildin and the urge to learn more kept
building... :)

[BlackCat]

If you need a Picture of the character im sure somone can draw it for you or at least find one for you ill be looking.
1. second name might also be nice
2. whats with 5.5 inches for height do you mean feet?
3. you may need to add an overall history but im not sure
4.(you don't need to yet but discribe ur road's abilitys) within reason of corse.

can't wait to see you in the RP now you just wait for aprroval from one of the RP mods^^

[Ayuki]

You're going to need to fix your stats. It does not add to 40.
Also, a surname (or last-name) would also be nice to make things a bit more clear in case there will ever be another "Kuu" around the RPG. Oh, yeah, before I forget, can you please put the road's abilities? About your history, put your background - we'd like to know more about the character, it'll give more "depth" into the profile.

[BlackCat]

Hmm getting there not sure if "quote"penetrate through anything..."quote" is ok but im no RP mod , also height is still inches , good job getting a picture though and the skill points and name seem fine now

[smoosh]

saniya!~ you're joining my team yea? just to make sure that it was you that asked...WELCOME~~ ^^ cant wait to see you at "training" hehe XD

[kinneth]

I don't think it'd be wise or legible for the other RPers if you decided to use first person whilst RPing, but if you really want to .. Uhm, I'm sure it's alright.
I encourage you use 2nd or 3rd person when RPing, so it'd be more understanding.
And about your road, if your using blades -- and on occasion to harm someone with them -- your road should be the ' Bloody Road, ' since it seems like the most highly candidate for those qualities. I'm not supportive of the idea of a road creating blades, unless they're implemented in the AT itself.
But, I think you should give it some thought.
And THEN, I'll approve this application. :)

[kinneth]

Approved, by Kinneth.