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Legendary Z
09-01-2007, 08:24 PM
Username: Legendary Z (aka: Z)

GENERAL

Name: Zenon Lee (aka: Z)
Gender: Male
Age: 19
School: Freshman in collage (Tokyo U)
School Clubs:

* Tack & Field
* Cross country
* Martial Arts Club

Skill Stats:

* Stamina: 13
* Strength:12
* Defense: 7
* Speed:20
Total Skill Points: 52


Status: F-Class
Road: Supersonic Road - Using the Pure speed of his style the AT's Core Produces Sonic booms after entering each sound barrier. Upon reaching benchmark speeds known as Mach's his speed and the power of the vibrations from the sonic boom increase. The vibrations get closer together and are much more violent. The core uses and air intake system that folds together compressed air to make powerfull thrust much like a jet engine.( subject to update after more research)
A-T Information: Very thin and narrow much like track shoes with a orange base with very jet like features!

LOOKS http://pc.magnacarta.co.kr/en/character/image/calintz.jpg

Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: white
Skin Tone: Pale
Height/Weight: 5'9''
Blood-type: O+
Overall Appearance: Nothing special (except for the intense feeling of speed you get in the pit of your stomach), a very Casual lazy laid back looking guy

PERSONALITY

Likes:

* Chicken
* Simplicity
* Speed

Dislikes:

* People who talk to much
* Doing things that dont need to be done
* Men that mistreat women

Hobbies:

* Sleep
* Sleep
* Sleep

Fears: Fear of being alone (in life)
Goals: To be the fastest
Overall Personality: Humble and selfless

HISTORY

Birthplace: Tokyo
Birthdate: 10/16/1987
Birthtime: 1:AM
Parents: Past away
Siblings: None

Overall History: Zenon was born to a average family living in the outer city his whole life attending public schools until his parents where killed in an alley muging they told him to run and to never stop he was then placed in a foster home where an older lady took him in she was not rich or poor and she never yelled she gave zenon great support getting him though school and then helping him aquire his first apartment in the inner city, about that time he started middle school (secondary school) and got into air treks. He mainly is at school with the 2 track and field clubs except on the weekend when he is at martial arts club. He loves night time and neon lights so he takes to the streets at night with his air trecks mostly watching other peoples battles and sprinting to the next one. He spends his practice time at the indoor track at school at night so no one bothers him. He believes that speed is power and with his talent in speed that he should be able to overcome anything. Coming into the present he went through middle school and high school without drawing any attention. He now is ready to make his debut with his air trecks and become a storm rider.

EXTRA

Extra: (TBA)

Roleplay Sample: The night was curiously bright from the neon lights, as Z trecked down the boardwalk to the c-class parts war bout of the evening. He had his euro beat on his ear buds and the music in his feet as he dashed to the up beat speedy tempo of euro beat! As he reached his destination he checked his watch to noticed it took him 10 min less than last night. Without knowing it he had shaved off even more time to the local parts war area. He had watched the c-class team numerous times since the entered e-class actually. As he took his usually spot up high and away from the usual crowed he noticed a few A'class riders standing nearby not paying them any attention he returned to his spaced out gaze and attention to detail. When ever he watched other he always seemed to be able to catch the little things from every bout, being slight changes in riders froms or in riders performances and reaction times. He always was able to notice alot more of what was going on when listining to his fast paced music. "So what brings the Chosen few around to a c-class parts war" but they cast a quick glare then went on ignoring him. Its probably better that they pay no attention to me Z thought

par167
09-01-2007, 09:43 PM
Wish I had the talent or the free time to do that .Great job ,I liked it, guy has a rough past and no parents to lean on makes him tough.Kinda like Ikki.

Legendary Z
09-01-2007, 09:47 PM
Heh thanks I actually thought it was weak and lacking.. My RPs are ok at best but i do like to rp the thinker kinda people that dont talk much, I can also rable at times but everybody has a flaw XD

megami_yume
09-01-2007, 11:49 PM
kakkoi!!! super cool!!!
nice image too!
i like your style of writing! you've got coherent and good flowing narration skills!
i'll be tracking your progress in RP ^^
*i don't RP since i suck at creating stories*

just a few suggestions:
* it doesn't bother me much (as long as i get what you mean to write) but make use of punctuation marks whenever needed ^^
* make it a habit of proofreading your paragraphs to minimize spelling and grammatical errors (please don't take offense; i spotted some ^_^x) or make someone proofread it for you ^^

*sorry for that ^_^x hope you don't get offended. it's just that i like your writing skills very much so i will be reading your RP posts as much as i can. but it is a fact that grammatical/spelling errors make my eyes bleed and the worst kind strains my brain :p

Legendary Z
09-02-2007, 12:43 AM
Oh no! I have been found out for my bad spelling and punctuation. Yes, i do love the idea of the run on sentence. I sometimes forget that not everyone slept through English class like me. :D

Ayuki
09-02-2007, 07:38 PM
Dang, you sure are popular! XD (your character might have some fangirls it seems...)
Anyways, good job on the application! You are ACCEPTED!

Legendary Z
09-02-2007, 11:52 PM
Thanks! now lets just hope I get the hang of the way things are done. :) I hate making people explain things to me. And My spelling and vocabulary is far from being strong.