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Uchiha_Kina
09-29-2008, 07:27 PM
Username: Uchiha_Kina

GENERAL

Name: Kina Armen
Gender: Female
Age: 17
School: Higashi High
School Clubs:

* Art
* Track
* Photography

Skill Stats:

* Stamina: 10
* Strength: 8
* Defense: 9
* Speed: 13
* Total Skill Points: 40.


Status: F Class
A-T Information: Black ATs with light blue laces with a light blue line running from the back of the AT to almost the toes. They have a black sole and light blue wheels with black rims.


LOOKS

Eye Colour: Blue
Hair Colour: Light blond, almost white
Skin Tone: Fairly tanned
Height/Weight: 5' 5" / 135 (She's kinda slender, but not too skinny)
Blood-type: A+
Overall Appearance:
When not wearing her school uniform, Kina likes to wear plain, bleached out blue jeans and a black t-shirt. She also likes to wear a fitted Disney cap that she got with her friends when they went to Disney before she moved out to Japan. Most of her jeans have holes in them from her AT practicing (she tends to fall a lot while trying to improve).

Her hair is hardly the same style. She seems to like hair styles that involve pigtails. Her reasoning behind it was 'It looks nice and it's out of the way'. When she began to ride, she cut her mid-back length hair to just past her shoulders. She has no bangs because they get into her eyes and she hates that.

When she is in school, however, she maintains her uniform to the letter of school code. This is mainly due to her father, even though she'd rather wear something more comfy and she hates wearing skirts.

Something all her outfits have is her ATs, slung up by the laces over her shoulder.

PERSONALITY

Likes:

* Sweets
* Going for walks in downpour
* Being barefoot
* Watching TV
* Reading fantasy novels
* Scouring the internet

Dislikes:

* Being proven wrong
* Shoes (besides her ATs, she thinks those are the only shoes for her)
* Judgmental people
* Bad music

Hobbies:

* AT
* Photography and drawing
* Sleeping in cold rooms

Fears:
Her biggest fear is not getting back up again.

Goals:
She wants, more than anything, to join a great AT team and prove to her father AT is great.

Overall Personality:
She seems pretty happy, to an outsider, but her mood can change quickly. She is very quick to crush on guys and even quicker to temper. She hates this part of herself because she often says horrible things to the people she really does love. Despite her fiery temper, which is mainly represented by red, her favorite color is blue, which is more calm. It reminds her of the sky after the rain clears.

When she is happy, she's pretty wispy and kinda unobservant if she doesn't have a reason to look around. Her happy side attracts guys, but after they see her angry, they tend to back off. She believes she's pretty much doomed in love, but she'd rather try and fail.

She feels a lot more free after she fit into the AT crowd when she first moved to Japan, where she had no friends.

HISTORY

Birthplace: Stuart, Florida

Birthdate: August 4th

Birthtime: 2:17 pm

Parents: Frank Armen (Father) and Lee-Anne Armen (Mother - Deceased)

Siblings: None

Overall History:
She was born in a lesser part of Florida in the United States as an Army Brat (born on an army base) where she got known in the area as a beach-bum, more or less. She'd always be swimming and she even surfed for a while, until she picked up a camera. Her mother, who had died when she was too young to remember, had dabbled in photography and art in general.

She photographed many of her friends with a digital camera and would sketch the ones she liked best. She was pretty popular around her old school and had little trouble finding a model to photograph. She enjoyed that feeling of freedom. She liked running to the beach on base and taking photos of the jets taking off and such.

One day, while going through her photos, she spotted an odd looking shadow above one of the helicopters. She squinted at the photo and saw it was a boy. She printed in out and examined it further, she wasn't wrong. She took the photo and placed it in her pocket and waited out by the beach, where it was taken. Finally, she saw him again. He flew in the air like one of the Sand Hill Cranes that occupied the area. She yelled to him and called him over, asking quickly how he did that. He merely said 'AT' and left her. She was sucked into the AT world, which wasn't very popular in America.

Not too long after, he father was re-assigned to Japan. After a long trip on a stuffy boat with no room to ride in her ATs, which her father fiercely disapproved of due to her numerous injuries and the affect of the sport on her grades, she arrived in Japan where AT culture was booming.

Eventually, her father's oppression of the sport drove her out of the base and on her own. She got a cheap apartment near the school.

EXTRA

Extra: She funds her AT hobbies and her other expenses through a part-time job and a mysterious envelope of cash that is mailed to her weekly. She believes it's from her father.

Also, because she moved inland, she misses the beach.

Roleplay Sample:
She began to tighten she laces as her enemy droned on. 'Weak? Inferior?', She thought with disdain, 'I'll show you weak.' She tied them up at the top into perfect bows. Kina blew air out of her nose forcefully like an angry bull. She stood up with perfect posture, somehow different than the slouching girl walking along the sidewalk barefoot, more serious. She ran her fingers through her hair much like on dusts off their pants after sitting on the ground. "Okay, Mr. I-Think-I'm-Better, let's go."

Ayuki
10-01-2008, 07:48 PM
- Stamina should remain at "10" (until you gain SP by posting will you then be allowed to add onto it).
- As for appearance, I think you could emphasize her hair a bit more. "Mid-length" does not bring vivid images (you could state the length of her bangs; is her hair naturally wavy or straight?).
- Personality — " She is very quick to crush and even quicker to temper. " -- what are you referring to? " Despite her fiery temper, her favorite color is blue. " It's an odd sentence since her ' fiery temper ', logically, is not directly tied into the color blue; unless you mean the color red (hot, fierce) in contrast. Revise the second paragraph in this section. You might notice some apparent mistakes. I want you to ask yourself " why? " after reading each sentence and type in the answer. Don't leave anything too vague.

Everything else seems pretty cool to me.
And you know what? We'd be in the same clubs. =D

Uchiha_Kina
10-02-2008, 04:54 PM
I think I fixed it, but please let me know if there is anything else I can fix.

CloudShadow
10-02-2008, 05:08 PM
Skill Stats:

* Stamina: 11
* Strength: 9
* Defense: 9
* Speed: 11
* Total Skill Points: 40.

You still have 11 Stamina. It has to be 10 when you start ^_^

Antiluz
10-02-2008, 05:19 PM
- Stamina should remain at "10"


Just re-iterating Ayuki and Cloud, very clear there.

Uchiha_Kina
10-02-2008, 05:23 PM
Just re-iterating Ayuki and Cloud, very clear there.
Ooooh, I totally zoned on the bold. >.>

Ayuki
10-02-2008, 06:10 PM
Welcome on board! Hope you enjoy your RPing experience.
You are now officially:

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Uchiha_Kina
10-02-2008, 06:42 PM
Welcome on board! Hope you enjoy your RPing experience.
You are now officially:

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4904/1approvedml4.png

Awesome~!