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pwnt2j
08-25-2008, 09:43 PM
Username: pwnt2j

GENERAL

Name: Cain law
Gender: Male
Age: 16
School: graduated

Skill Stats:
• Stamina: 10.
• Strength: 10
• Defense: 5
• Speed: 16

• Total Skill Points: 40.


Status: F-class
A-T Information: His A-T’s are built primarily with grinding in mind. Smaller wheels than standard and enforced soles allow him to complete a large array of twisting contorting tricks as he grinds.


LOOKS

http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x300/pwnt2j/airgear.png


Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Dyed Purple
Skin Tone: Reddish Brown
Height/Weight: 6ft 2in/ 115lb.
Blood-type: AB
Overall Appearance: Tall, lanky, he tends to wear a windbreaker and a large sock hat. He’ll never really remove his hat, it’s mostly removed by outward force. His clothes tend to be baggy and on a set color scheme: purple, blue, and black.

PERSONALITY

Likes:
• Peanut Butter

• Women

• Comics

Dislikes:
• The dark

• Work

• Aliens

Hobbies:
• Drawing

• Writing comics

• Playing video games

Fears: Dying
Goals: To live a full life the way he wants
Overall Personality: Calm at most. Nothing that is outside his likes and hobbies really excites him. Cain tends to be close minded about the things in his life, and extremely ignorant of those outside. It's rare, but new things that excite him spark a fire in him that can end up making him great at whatever it is. He acts dense sometimes on purpose, and with that he likes messing with people and making them feel uncomfortable. He has this weird little quirk of feigning foreign accents, making weird little noises, and singing the totally wrong lyrics to whatever song that comes to mind when he's bored. He tries to never act serious on serious occasions (or most of the time for that matter), when he does act serious, it's easy for him to get angry and offensive.

HISTORY

Birthplace: Cairo, Egypt
Birth date: March 2
Birth time: 5:05 am
Parents: Mom/Rena Law-currently in Egypt ~ Dad/Dolan Law-currently in Egypt
Siblings: Older Sister/Trina Law-With him in Tokyo Age 22

Overall History: Cain grew up mostly around his older sister. His parents' work and his home school education kept him away from a lot of other kids his own age. After his sister moved out and left for Japan, Cain quickly graduated from school and left Cairo. In Tokyo, Cain started working as a delivery boy for his sister's A-T part shop. Eventually he took up A-T's as a way to make his job easier.
EXTRA

Extra: He has incredible reflexes and he tends to prefer narrow routes that are inaccessible to most.

Role-play Sample:

Twist that ankle three degrees, turn the head a quarter of an inch to the left…
With that out of the way Cain could finally start inking his picture.

~Tap Tap~

“Hey Cain,” Trina was standing at Cain’s door holding a box. ”I need you to deliver these wheels.”

With a deep sigh, Cain stood up and walked across the room and took the package in hand. In a matter of minutes he was outside tearing through the alleyways and streets.

“Another day… another unfinished project… Geez…,”
Cain grumbled as he was getting ready to turn onto a busy street.

Suddenly out of the blue, 2 Storm Rider teams came from behind him.
Without any time to react he was caught in the crossfire of someone's kick.

As fast as it started, it was over.
Cain picked himself up off of the ground and stood there for a moment trying to collect himself.
His brain was rattling.
He saw so many moves, so many motions.
It got him excited, something totally against his circle of interest was exciting him.

Not shortly after delivering the package, Cain stood in his doorway.
'This is what I come back too...,' his whole world seemed dull compared to what had happened.
He knew people enjoyed Air Trek, he knew it felt good to go out there and fly on wheels like that.
Seeing a real Storm Rider fight was something that unhinged a lock.
He wanted more, he wanted to see it on the other end, he needed to get out there and figure out what was going on.

And so he did...

Sendo
08-25-2008, 11:44 PM
hmmm, the fact that you graduated at around 16, might annoy some people and you might have to give a bit more of a detailed explanation for his overall personality.

the overall history really needs work. and your rp sample is very very short.

you could check some of the other Bio's for info. check out the ranks from C and up to see what your missing.

and for now, thats all I can think of.

pwnt2j
08-27-2008, 08:11 PM
Yeah, I went through it and changed some stuff according to what you said

krompt
08-27-2008, 09:07 PM
http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/4904/1approvedml4.png

pwnt2j
08-27-2008, 09:38 PM
Ai!? I got accepted! ~Happy Happy Joy Joy~

pwnt2j
08-28-2008, 07:31 PM
GENERAL

Name: Cain law
Gender: Male
Age: 16
School: graduated

Skill Stats:
• Stamina: 10.
• Strength: 10
• Defense: 5
• Speed: 15

• Total Skill Points: 40.


Status: F-class
A-T Information: His A-T’s are built primarily with grinding in mind. Smaller wheels than standard and enforced soles allow him to complete a large array of twisting contorting tricks as he grinds.


LOOKS

http://i184.photobucket.com/albums/x300/pwnt2j/airgear.png


Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Dyed Purple
Skin Tone: Reddish Brown
Height/Weight: 6ft 2in/ 115lb.
Blood-type: AB
Overall Appearance: Tall, lanky, he tends to wear a windbreaker and a large sock hat. He’ll never really remove his hat, it’s mostly removed by outward force. His clothes tend to be baggy and on a set color scheme: purple, blue, and black.

PERSONALITY

Likes:
• Peanut Butter

• Women

• Comics

Dislikes:
• The dark

• Work

• Aliens

Hobbies:
• Drawing

• Writing comics

• Playing video games

Fears: Dying
Goals: To live a full life the way he wants
Overall Personality: Calm at most. Nothing that is outside his likes and hobbies really excites him. Cain tends to be close minded about the things in his life, and extremely ignorant of those outside. It's rare, but new things that excite him spark a fire in him that can end up making him great at whatever it is. He acts dense sometimes on purpose, and with that he likes messing with people and making them feel uncomfortable. He has this weird little quirk of feigning foreign accents, making weird little noises, and singing the totally wrong lyrics to whatever song that comes to mind when he's bored. He tries to never act serious on serious occasions (or most of the time for that matter), when he does act serious, it's easy for him to get angry and offensive.

HISTORY

Birthplace: Cairo, Egypt
Birth date: March 2
Birth time: 5:05 am
Parents: Mom/Rena Law-currently in Egypt ~ Dad/Dolan Law-currently in Egypt
Siblings: Older Sister/Trina Law-With him in Tokyo Age 22

Overall History: Cain grew up mostly around his older sister. His parents' work and his home school education kept him away from a lot of other kids his own age. After his sister moved out and left for Japan, Cain quickly graduated from school and left Cairo. In Tokyo, Cain started working as a delivery boy for his sister's A-T part shop. Eventually he took up A-T's as a way to make his job easier.
EXTRA

Extra: He has incredible reflexes and he tends to prefer narrow routes that are inaccessible to most.

Role-play Sample:

Twist that ankle three degrees, turn the head a quarter of an inch to the left…
With that out of the way Cain could finally start inking his picture.

~Tap Tap~

“Hey Cain,” Trina was standing at Cain’s door holding a box. ”I need you to deliver these wheels.”

With a deep sigh, Cain stood up and walked across the room and took the package in hand. In a matter of minutes he was outside tearing through the alleyways and streets.

“Another day… another unfinished project… Geez…,”
Cain grumbled as he was getting ready to turn onto a busy street.

Suddenly out of the blue, 2 Storm Rider teams came from behind him.
Without any time to react he was caught in the crossfire of someone's kick.

As fast as it started, it was over.
Cain picked himself up off of the ground and stood there for a moment trying to collect himself.
His brain was rattling.
He saw so many moves, so many motions.
It got him excited, something totally against his circle of interest was exciting him.

Not shortly after delivering the package, Cain stood in his doorway.
'This is what I come back too...,' his whole world seemed dull compared to what had happened.
He knew people enjoyed Air Trek, he knew it felt good to go out there and fly on wheels like that.
Seeing a real Storm Rider fight was something that unhinged a lock.
He wanted more, he wanted to see it on the other end, he needed to get out there and figure out what was going on.

And so he did...

~Note~
I had to edit my stats.
didn't notice they didn't add up...