Burnerflash
08-10-2008, 03:20 AM
I really need to improve on my grammar it really disrupts/ruins the poem but hopefully you will enjoy my poems and feel free to correct me.
There is no time to rest
Time,keeps going, growing
We losing time, that's what the clock is showing
Time is chance, something can't be made but giving
So god i pray to take away my sins,just to know im forgiven
What a blessin it was to be here and breathin
but it would be much more blessin to be in heaven
where there is no pain and time has no meaning
where there is always love and no hate
for all my loves ones i prey they are released
Because thats when you trully rest in peace
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Dear to this lovely flower
This flower can never die here
It will always live even though
i know this winter comes& go
imma still see a flower
its a girl i know
she blooms in my face everytime i talk to her
i try to hold her..but the thorns tat she has hurt me badly:(
it's like something peircing through your skin viciously
but i look inside of me why do i try endlessly
to show you that my love for you is never ending see
when i look at your eyes i see a blue deep sea
and when i look inside of you i notice i'm trapped drowing to be free
i wonder sometimes how can such beautiful ithing in my eyes
be so dangerous under the disguise
i feel like i was not wise to fall in love with her
because the heart i had is still peirced with her......
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So many emotions buried inside
To the point, I don’t know how to feel
Everything I touch seems so meaningless
Seeing is what your eye feeds off
So why am I eating all of these awful images
Why does this light hit my eye?
And reflect on these things
In the Back of my mind it’s like a violin
I be controlling it by pulling these strings
Silently it plays a wonderful beat to me
Hearing the heart, it’s 6 feet under me
Seeking inside, but not even light can see
That’s how deep my heart is
My heart living in the darkness
burried inside it
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more will come later on after i get some rest :whistle::yes:
There is no time to rest
Time,keeps going, growing
We losing time, that's what the clock is showing
Time is chance, something can't be made but giving
So god i pray to take away my sins,just to know im forgiven
What a blessin it was to be here and breathin
but it would be much more blessin to be in heaven
where there is no pain and time has no meaning
where there is always love and no hate
for all my loves ones i prey they are released
Because thats when you trully rest in peace
----------------------------------------
Dear to this lovely flower
This flower can never die here
It will always live even though
i know this winter comes& go
imma still see a flower
its a girl i know
she blooms in my face everytime i talk to her
i try to hold her..but the thorns tat she has hurt me badly:(
it's like something peircing through your skin viciously
but i look inside of me why do i try endlessly
to show you that my love for you is never ending see
when i look at your eyes i see a blue deep sea
and when i look inside of you i notice i'm trapped drowing to be free
i wonder sometimes how can such beautiful ithing in my eyes
be so dangerous under the disguise
i feel like i was not wise to fall in love with her
because the heart i had is still peirced with her......
------------------------------------------------
So many emotions buried inside
To the point, I don’t know how to feel
Everything I touch seems so meaningless
Seeing is what your eye feeds off
So why am I eating all of these awful images
Why does this light hit my eye?
And reflect on these things
In the Back of my mind it’s like a violin
I be controlling it by pulling these strings
Silently it plays a wonderful beat to me
Hearing the heart, it’s 6 feet under me
Seeking inside, but not even light can see
That’s how deep my heart is
My heart living in the darkness
burried inside it
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more will come later on after i get some rest :whistle::yes: