Kouri's Linearts and then some

[Kouri]

Ok, ok, I know, you're thinking: Lineart?! WTH?
Well GUESS WHAT?! I can't color for shiz... Dx;
I will TRY but I noticed that there are some awesome
people on here that can COLOR! And I can't COLOR
So if you guys dun mind, I'd like to post up my linearts for
you guys if you know, for practice or... whatnot.. ^-^;

I WILL be posting up finished pieces, but that's only if I'm confident
in them, so yeah... Hope you guys don't mind! <3

Linearts:
(Mature Content?)
http://img6.uploadhouse.com/fileuploads/2088/2088196cc607615d6ddad78342333f1aaf21029.jpg

Notes: Up there is a Kururu pic. Yes, I know, I probably did a million things wrong... Dx; But yeah, the idea is supposed to be like a dreamy pic, that's why her hair disolves into a white, so it makes an illusion looking like Wings at the end, her bandaid is at the bottom corner of course, and is she naked?
Um, I think so, just cause she has no clothes, but again, it's supposed to be a dreamy like picture, so originally, it's supposed to fade out from there...

P.S. More to come! And if you colored any of the lineart or customized it, be sure to link me to it on this thread! <3

[smoosh]

the idea is good~ the face needs a little work though >_< keep it up!~

[p4091a]

nice flowy hair, but like smoshy said, the face needs a little editing =d
PS. lol I don't think its mature content XD

[chrollo]

ooo cool thanks for posting it hope u post more soon^^

[Kouri]

Lulz! thanx you guys for the advice!
Although, what part of the face do I need
to fix? The face shape? The position of the eyes/nose?
Lips? xD;
Constructive criticism would be nice... >w>;

[chrollo]

imo i would fix the chin and make the head a bit smaller and more to scale with the rest of the body