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Makubex
02-28-2008, 10:00 PM
Username: Makubex

GENERAL

Name: Ryuu Yamato
Gender: Male
Age: 17
School: Higashi High
School Clubs:

* Soccer
*
*

Skill Stats:

Stamina: 21 (+11)
Strength: 15 (+5)
Defense: 21 (+11)
Speed: 23 (+17)

Total Skill Points: 80 SP (+44)

Status: E Class
Road: Lather Road
A-T Information: Clearish White with a little blue on the sides, Ryuu's AT are very sturdy and only break once in a while. (His AT are like Agito's with the like two metal things coming out of the front AT but not exact and I don't know how to explain/describe it)
http://i28.tinypic.com/jhfu50.png


LOOKS
http://i30.tinypic.com/b712xh.png

Eye Colour: Glimmering White
Hair Colour: Red
Skin Tone: White
Height/Weight: 6 Ft 109 Lbs
Blood-type: AB
Overall Appearance:(Picture for Shirt, Hair, etc) Ryuu often wears a White Jacket that he had received from his brother and rarely takes it off. He usually wears White Sweat Pants or White Jeans that are not too tight and are not too wide that are just perfect for him. Ryuu often keeps a straight face, He rarely smiles. His strength is not extremely buffed and are not small, he has a reasonable and healthy ammount of muscles.

PERSONALITY

Likes:

* AT
* Watching the Gem King
* Chewing Strawberry/Fruit Gum

Dislikes:

* Annoying Kids
* Ignorances
* Noisy People

Hobbies:

* AT
* Soccer
*

Fears: Seeing the sight of multiples dots
Goals: To become the Next Gem King
Overall Personality: He is often quiet and can be funny at times, Ryuu most of the time is serious. Ryuu is outgoing and he loves playing Soccer. Ryuu is often happy and refuses to become Emo no matter what. In Higashi High, Ryuu is often labeled as "Popular" but he doesn't care if his label is nerd or geek. He always puts his friends first no matter what and will help them no matter what. Ryuu has a thing for Rock music and absolutely hates Rap, His favorite band would have to be Metallica. Ryuu is nice to others if they are nice to him, He despises Selfish and Ignorant Kids that think they are cool and all that.

HISTORY

Birthplace: Tokyo, Japan
Birthdate: January 3rd, 1991
Birthtime: 2:15 A.M.
Parents: Yamato Kimi and Yamato Issui
Siblings: One Older brother

Overall History: Ryuu was born into a rich family being the youngest. His older brother, Kyuu, was born in Japan for 16 years and he received the money from his parents to go to America. When Ryuu had just turned 17, His brother had come back from America from 7 years being notified of Ryuu's seventeenth birthday. Kyuu, Ryuu's older brother thought that Ryuu was ready to be introduced to the world of Air Trecks or AT. Kyuu had explained everything from Roads and to Kings and Regalias. Ryuu was interested when his brother mentioned the Gem King and how it interacted with the ground and such. Ryuu had questioned how Kyuu knew all of that and he answered back that when he was 16, he was a B-Class Storm-Rider and had watched Kings battle a reasonable ammount of times. He thought to himself that it would typically be playing soccer and he was determined to become the next Gem King. Kyuu had explained that becoming a King is very hard work and that he would be put with a lot of responsiblity. His older brother didn't want to see his brother one day, become a King. Kyuu had regret of introducing to Ryuu because of Ryuu's personality. Ryuu, noticing his brother's face, promised that he wouldn't get hurt.

Roleplay Sample: *Splash, Splash* Rain was being poured down on Ryuu's head; he didn't mind and went on continuing what he was doing. "How much is this?" questioned Ryuu to the Parts Owner. "Well," she responded back,"that would be 1000 Yen." Hmm, Should I buy them or not he thought. He had handed the lady exactly 1000 yen and had carried it behind his back. Rain was still splashing down on him making his hair damp and clothes wet. He had eventually gotten cold and decided to go home.

Makubex
02-29-2008, 07:31 PM
Fixed

Jakkin
03-01-2008, 02:24 AM
I suggest you copypasta this into Microsoft Word, and correct the spelling and context errors.

Just my opinion.

Makubex
03-01-2008, 11:34 AM
Thanks for the advice =O

Makubex
03-02-2008, 07:17 PM
Um Bump =\

Ayuki
03-04-2008, 06:13 PM
Fix your A-T Information - no A-T's are literally "indestructible".
And, uh, your eye color - take out the words in parentheses, having it "clear" means that he wouldn't have an eye color, basically. You also say that your character received a jacket from his sister... when he has a BROTHER. <,<''

In his "Likes", what do you mean by "Watching the Gem King's A-T's"? - you should reword it to make sense. Add more to your personality, and fix your history. I mean, your character's older brother CANNOT be the previous Gem King mainly because we already HAVE a Gem King -- an NPC (http://www.sorascans.com/forums/showthread.php?t=2015) one. And what do you mean "protect the Sky Regalia until the right owner comes" - you make it sound as if he HAS the Sky regalia in his possession; I'd rather if you didn't put anything about the Sky regalia in your history, though - it kind of kills it, considering that your character is an F-ranker in the beginning. Well, not that it would matter, but yeah, since your character's brother cannot be the "previous" Gem King, I'm assuming a large portion of your history would change.

Makubex
03-04-2008, 06:30 PM
Yay, And I editted it to your liking.

Ayuki
03-05-2008, 11:38 PM
>xD Thanks for putting up with me.
Anyways, after a long time of editing and stuff, you are hereby ACCEPTED!

Makubex
03-12-2008, 08:27 PM
Skill Stats:

Stamina: 14 (+4)
Strength: 12 (+2)
Defense: 14 (+4)
Speed: 14 (+8)

Total Skill Points: 54

Makubex
03-13-2008, 07:23 PM
Skill Stats:

Stamina: 16 (+6)
Strength: 12 (+2)
Defense: 14 (+4)
Speed: 16 (+10)

Total Skill Points: 58 (2.5 TP)

Makubex
03-16-2008, 09:23 AM
Skill Stats:

Stamina: 18 (+2)
Strength: 12 (+2)
Defense: 18 (+8)
Speed: 18 (+12)

Total Skill Points: 66 SP (24) 1 TP

Makubex
03-18-2008, 04:52 PM
Skill Stats:

Stamina: 20 (+10)
Strength: 14 (+4)
Defense: 20 (+10)
Speed: 20 (+14)

Total Skill Points: 74 SP (38) 1 TP

Makubex
03-20-2008, 06:02 PM
Skill Stats:

Stamina: 21 (+11)
Strength: 15 (+5)
Defense: 21 (+11)
Speed: 23 (+17)

Total Skill Points: 80 SP (+44)

Makubex
03-20-2008, 06:02 PM
I forgot to put move me up to E-Class =o

Makubex
04-05-2008, 04:01 PM
Skill Stats:

Stamina: 25
Strength: 15
Defense: 25
Speed: 34

Total Skill Points: 80 SP (+44)

Makubex
04-05-2008, 04:02 PM
Skill Stats:

Stamina: 25
Strength: 15
Defense: 25
Speed: 34

Total Skill Points: 100 SP

Sorry about that >>