Layout critiques.

[Blant]

I did this template like 2 years ago, I ment to finish it..the reason my website zero-glitch.net isn't up (just folders of random crap) is because I haven't finished this, and I think I'm going to do it soon.

About it: It's about 90% finished (layout wise) and will be 100% flash, everything except for the background will be flash.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y152/Blant/mysite-1.jpg

I need to change the background of the menu area to give it some effects (doesn't fit the rest of the site, I've been changing this layout for months, I work on it for 3 hours, and then 1 month later look at it and think it sucks so I start over).

Other sites I've done:
http://www.genevasports.com/
http://gridironbash.com/
http://envivoamerica.com/

are 3 recent flash pieces. A lot of the graphics were given to me I just take it from there.


So guys tell me critiques on my layout, what I can do to improve it. I'm not even sure if I want to make webcomics anymore, so I have no clue what the content will be :) but I was going for a darker themed site.

[¯\_(ツ)_/¯]

hrrm it looks smooth i like it the only thing that bothers me is the text on the bars, other than that its nice
for teh others
genevasports looks very clean, nice and simple, and simple works i like it i dont see anything wrong with it at all

gridiron bash is good though its a bit choppy in some places, i dont know it might just be my monitor for that

envivoamerica looks pro, the only complaint on this one is the choppiness of the the sponser things at the bottomothere than that its smexy

[playsafe]

I agree with the person with the cool siggie. the first layout seems... rough? im not that much of a critic because i tend to think everything looks good. (You can tell by my siggie :mad: ) Well very nice sites.

[Blant]

thanks guys, I guess next week I'll finish the layout and post another image of it and you guys can tell me how it looks, I'm not even sure what kind of website to make anymore, there's already enough webcomics, I might need to think of a new plan :)

[Aeonsky]

Missed this thread.

The layout is incredible. It's apparent how you focused all your attention to making at a "techy" layout. Looks very good, flows good, good alignment, good orientation and the needed consistency is there. Very professional looking!

[jaourashima]

the layout is nice but it needs some finishing touches, as aeon said the layout is focused in the techno thing what made it very beautiful, some parts are a little rough though as the left side of the buttons, but the set is very nice congrats o/.