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Arakawa
12-05-2007, 10:10 AM
Username: Arakawa

GENERAL

Name: Arakawa Takeshi
Gender: Male
Age: 16
School: Higashi High
School Clubs:
Hockey Club
Football Club
Music Club



Skill Stats:
Stamina: 10
Strength: 11 (+1)
Defense: 7 (-3)
Speed: 12 (+2)



Status: F Class
A-T Information: Built with a metalic steel frame. Stitched with tough nylon fibers, with comfort cushions within the boot. The wheels are made light, with a super strong graphite composite core. The front is reinforced with a half inch thick steel plate covered in bumps in a sand paper-like composition. The heel has a single spike with a pointed edge.
Road:

LOOKS http://i161.photobucket.com/albums/t217/Arakawa_Takeshi/Onitsume.jpg

Eye Colour: Brown
Hair Colour: Black
Skin Tone: Light Tan
Height/Weight: 5'6"/132 lbs
Blood-type: A
Overall Appearance: Regularly seen in dark colored clothing. He wears a circular bracelet on his right wrist with the word "Retribution" engraved in it. He has rather long hair so the ties up the back end with a string.

PERSONALITY

Likes:
Girls
Sports
Guns


Dislikes:
Pricks
Vegetables
Insects



Hobbies: Collecting shoes

Fears: Dying, Being unable to breathe.
Goals: Becoming a king in the AT world.
Overall Personality: Can be a bit of a fag sometimes if he lets his temper get the best of him. Will try to do the right thing although he's usually not successful unless the situation benefits him.

HISTORY

Birthplace: Okinawa, Japan
Birthdate: June 5th, XXXX
Birthtime: 2:54 PM
Parents: Arakawa Soushi and Gath Linda (American)
Siblings: N/A

Overall History: His mother was an American woman who flew to Japan to visit her brother's naval station. She then met Soushi as one of her brother's friends and instantly hit it off. During their trip around Japan (after marriage) they conceived a child; Takeshi. During his early years as a child Takeshi was fascinated by the sport hockey. His uncle would always bring him tapes of games and teach him how to skate. When he found out abot ATs in his later years it was an instant attraction.

EXTRA

Extra: None? o_o

Roleplay Sample:

The timer was running out. "40..39..38." He dashed to his left, hitting the opposing stick, sneaking the puck from under him. It was only another defender and the goalie here. He knew he had to take a risk. With little time left on the clock the score was tied 3-3. He hoped for a miracle shot.

He raised his stick in the air. They fell for it. the defender came swooping in to block the shot. Takeshi was fully aware of this and swept the puck to his right; a perfect feint. 1 on 1 with the goalie. He faked right, and cut left. The goalie was down on the right side leaving the upper left area open. He flung his wrist as fast as he could and sent the puck flying just under the goal post. But it was blocked.

The goalie was raised his stick just in time to block it. "10..9..8." It was over the game was tied and...wait the puck was still free behind the net. He blew by into the back and took the puck. "5..4..3"

Now or never

He swiveled his stick picking up the puck with the foot of his stick. Defenders were dashing for him, desperately trying to keep the tie score. But there were his trusty friends blocking the way giving him time. "2..." He curved his stick and flung the puck to the goalie blindspot. The puck dropped into the net. "1..."

"GOAL!"

(Vid of the trick: http://youtube.com/watch?v=dWLqaGGrc78)

Notes: tell me if I need to change anything

Phelen
12-05-2007, 01:23 PM
Looks pretty good over all. The only thing (and it doesn't matter for the app) is that when posting for your character in the rp forums, try to keep in in paragraph format as much as possible. It'll make counting the tp you get for it easier. Nice description of the A-Ts but keep in mind that they won't give you any bonuses or anything from the start, ne? As for road, you don't need one starting but think about it and pm one of the mods when you decide on one.

I look forward to roleplaying with you when you get approved (sorry, I'm not a mod).

Leave
12-05-2007, 01:29 PM
Can be a bit of a fag sometimes if he lets his temper get the best of him.

I lol'd.

Everything looks good. Status means your current rank, so I edited that in there so that I could approve it. Just make sure to PM a mod with your road once you've ranked up a bit and have it worked out properly.

Enjoy your RP experience ;]

APPROVED! by Leave ;]