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Fritz
01-22-2011, 09:32 AM
Username: Fritz
GENERAL
Name: Fritz Emden
Gender: Male
Age: 17
School: Higashi High
School Clubs:
Snowboarding
Computer Club
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 10
Strength: 10
Defense: 8
Speed: 12
Total Skill Points: 40.
Status: F-class
A-T Information: Feint Runner
A-Ts that are slightly bigger than his feet the colors are mainly various tones of blue with light tinges of red and white near the toe of his A-Ts
LOOKS


Eye Colour: Shiny blue
Hair Colour: Light brown with a very slight tinge of blue and red dyes mixed in with his natural light brown hair.
Skin Tone: Caucasian
Height/Weight: 5'10" 136lbs.
Blood-type: AB
Overall Appearance: He has short brown straight hair that slightly falls over his left eye he mostly wears a brown long sleeve hoodie with a white short sleeve shirt and pants accompanied by some sunglasses that have a blue tint to them, a set of headphones around his neck, and maybe a pair of black gloves; you would not see him in anything he thinks is girly, or a business suit he wears that very rarely and probly will not wear it unless he has to wear it. He keeps a back pack with him that him to store whatever he needs wheather it be a lunch, an extra set of clothes; whatever seems like he needs at the moment as well as a silver watch from his dad on his right wrist and a small sapphire pendant around his neck from his mother. His face is fairly slim with a slight beard and mustache growning on his face. He has a tall moderate build although his body does not have a lot of muscle on it. He has a long thin scar on his side to go with his build do to an accident. He has covered at all times just about. His face keeps a casual kind face and fairly oftenly you can catch a smile on his face. When he is surprised you would see his shiny blue eyes raised.
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PERSONALITY

Likes:
Music
Speed
Manga
Fruits
Dislikes:
Who he is currently is
His fears
Hobbies:
Snowboarding
Reading
Video games
Eating fruits
Fears:
His parent's killer
Death
Being powerless

Goals:
To be well known as a rider decent skills
To take down his parent's killer anyway possible
Protect his family
To bring his fears under control

Overall Personality: Fritz is your typical rider, as he rides he trys to hide or camoflauge his fears and some of his past. Which at times does not go very well and leads people to reading him fully like a well known book by a great author; as he likes eating various fruits, snowboarding, listening to music, and him training his skills with his A-Ts who he got from his parents which he protects and uses oftenly due to it being one of the final momentos of his parents; along with him feeling edgy, fear, shy, insecure, weak, uncertain and useless.

The death of his parents has put a toll of death on his mind which has led him to becoming shy and having great fear of death from thier death. He constantly fights his fears by getting close to or obtaining his goals, he does not mind small cuts and bruises to reach them. He constantly practices, to bring himself to become the man he wants to be driving away his fears and continue to get stronger to help or assist his friends to get to become some use and not be useless, not to bring any friends down. He wants to live his life as much as he can with atleast some of his goals accomplished. So he can look back on his life and say. 'Well I led a good life, with my friends and family.'
MINIMUM OF 200 WORDS.

HISTORY

Birthplace: Cologne, Germany
Birthdate: November 26
Birthtime: 12:22 am
Parents: Hans Emden (Deceased) Marie Emden (Deceased)
Siblings: 1 brother, 2 sisters

Overall History: Born in the early morning, Fritz was born into your modern day middle class family in Germany, being the first child of the family. He started off at an early age by his well loving family. As he witnessed various things new to him; when his family brought back a baby when he was had just turned three and unknowningly to him something he would witness another two times. As his family grew larger the love his family gave him started to spread out between them, as that happened he did grow somewhat jealous and protective of his younger siblings as time slowly passed.
When he was at the age of 14, he started to give love to his younger siblings which had felt strange to him at the time. He never had much trouble as he went to school; he had managed to keep his grades up as he went through school not causing much problems; until he reached the age of 16 when he found out that a bully was causing problems to one of his younger sisters. He put an end to that immediatly beating the kid up, he unfortunatly got caught later and got in trouble for his deed. Time after went slowly, went he reached his 17th birthday he got a pair of Air Trecks, then found something he loved riding around at high speed.
Then that is when tradegy struck, when he and his parents were at home while his siblings were at friends. A killer broke in and before his parents could react they were dead, he himself was on the floor holding his leg as the bullet that was shot at him only nicked him. Before the killer could finish him the police arrived on scene, and the last thing he heard from the killer before he escaped was. 'Im going to find you and kill the rest of you and your family off.' A week later they were on a flight to Japan to live wih thier grandma, with the fear of death instilled by the killer.
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EXTRA

Extra: He knows some Japanese learned from his grandma

Roleplay Sample: The streets at night were quiet at this part of town as Fritz road down the road at a high speed. If he was late then he knew granny would be angry at him. As he raced down the street to get home he noticed a few other storm riders making suggestive gestures that they wanted to have a friendly race.

"A race huh? Fine lets get this rolling. I might get home a little quicker." He said as he raced down the street. He weaved in and out of the side traffic and any car that was driving down the road. He appearently surprised one of the drivers as he weaved by because seconds later he heard crushing metal his head quickly looked back then forward.

"Great... I don't think I will hear the end of it if granny hears I caused a car accident even if I am her favorite grandson." He thought to himself and he edged his blue sunglasses even closer to his face as he raced down the road, since the street lights provided a very bright light at this time of night. He slowed as he reached his house and waved good bye to the riders that road by, as each of the riders gave a quick wave back. As he entered the house he was met by granny's rolling pin that came smashing into the top of his head, he gave a nervous chuckle as his grandma scolded him, smashing the rolling pin into the top of his head again.

(Haven't made one of these in a long time, and it does not help when you only have note pad. So I apolgize if there are some mistakes in it.)

CloudShadow
01-22-2011, 04:38 PM
Ugh, more people who lost their parents x_x Anyway...

Nothing inherently wrong with this app, but I recommend you download OpenOffice (http://open-office.software.en.softonic.com/download?gclid=CLXqxavhzqYCFeR65QodeXsRTA) if you're relying on notepad. You had a fair number of grammatical and spelling errors, and you really seem to like run-on sentences which could really hurt you in the long run since we award TP by sentences.

Anyway, watch your spelling and grammar (particularly your run on sentences) and remember how we award TP:

5 sentences of 10 or more words = 1 paragraph
1 paragraph = 1tp
5tp = 1sp

If you've got any questions feel free to PM me, or anyone with a green name (we are the RP mods), and remember to provide links to your threads for your SP Claims!

Approved! by CloudShadow

Oh yeah, before I forget. All people who just get approved for the first time get a 2 week bonus to any TP they claim. So get RPing as quick as you can and claim before 2 weeks have passed (February 5th 2011)

Fritz
02-04-2011, 03:29 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 11(+1)
Strength: 11(+1)
Defense: 8
Speed: 14 (+2)
Total Skill Points: 44.

Fritz
02-12-2011, 07:00 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 11
Strength: 12(+1)
Defense: 8
Speed: 15(+1)
Total Skill Points: 46.

2.5 Tp left over

Fritz
02-16-2011, 04:41 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 11
Strength: 14(+2)
Defense: 8
Speed: 16(+1)
Total Skill Points: 49

Fritz
03-07-2011, 05:35 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 13(+2)
Strength: 17(+3)
Defense: 8
Speed: 16
Total Skill Points: 55

Fritz
08-09-2011, 11:20 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 15(+2)
Strength: 17
Defense: 9(+1)
Speed: 16
Total Skill Points: 58

Fritz
08-15-2011, 09:15 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 17 (+2)
Strength: 19 (+2)
Defense: 11 (+2)
Speed: 18 (+2)

Total Skill points: 66

Tp leftover: 1

Fritz
08-27-2011, 10:43 AM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 19(+2)
Strength: 20 (+1)
Defense: 11
Speed: 22 (+4)

Total Skill Points: 73

Fritz
09-07-2011, 07:47 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 21 (+2)
Strength: 20
Defense: 11
Speed: 26 (+4)

Total Skill Points: 79

3 tp left over

Fritz
09-09-2011, 03:53 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 21
Strength: 22(+2)
Defense: 11
Speed: 26

Skill Point Total: 81

1 Tp left over

E Class Reached

Fritz
09-13-2011, 09:00 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 22(+1)
Strength: 23(+1)
Defense: 11
Speed: 26

Skill Point Total: 83

Wing Road claimed

Fritz
09-21-2011, 07:02 AM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 22
Strength: 23
Defense: 15(+4)
Speed: 26

Skill Point Total: 83

Fritz
09-21-2011, 07:04 AM
whoops

Skill Points Total: 87

Fritz
10-20-2011, 05:44 AM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 22
Strength: 23
Defense: 20(+5)
Speed: 26

Skill Point total: 91 (After noticing I was at 86 instead of 87 due to a mistake I must of made earlier in one of my posts for skills)

E tank trick claimed

Soul Vision
Rank: E
Stat Requirement: Defence: 20 Stamina: 20
Type: Defensive
Target: Self
In RP Description: The only thing the storm rider can see is their goal; all other things like pain are blocked out, although some damage still takes place. Riders with the soul vision ability are able to charge ruthlessly through barrages of punches and kicks, as if nothing was happening to them.
Ruling: Half the rider's focus is restored. Increase the rider's defense by an amount equal to half that rider's focus until the end of the round. This trick can only be used once per battle.

Fritz
11-07-2011, 03:53 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 22
Strength: 23
Defense: 20(+5)
Speed: 26










Fritz: 32 TP, $445

Fritz
11-07-2011, 03:56 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 22
Strength: 25(+2)
Defense: 20
Speed: 30(+4)

Total SP: 97

Current cash: $445 (Unless I have to claim even if I got it from a quest)

Fritz
11-09-2011, 10:05 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 24 (+2)
Strength: 27(+2)
Defense: 20
Speed: 30

Total SP: 101

TP left over: 2

Current cash: $445

Fritz
11-22-2011, 06:17 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 26(+2)
Strength: 27
Defense: 20
Speed: 32(+2)

Total SP: 101

TP left over: 4

Current cash: $445

Fritz
11-26-2011, 06:02 PM
incorrect SP total

SP Total:105

Fritz
11-28-2011, 06:14 AM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 30(+4)
Strength: 27
Defense: 20
Speed: 32

Total SP: 109

TP left over: 2.5

Current cash: $445

Fritz
01-02-2012, 06:42 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 32(+2)
Strength: 31(+4)
Defense: 20
Speed: 34(+2)

Total SP: 117

TP left over: 1.5

Current cash: $445

Fritz
05-11-2012, 09:34 PM
Skill Stats:
Stamina: 34(+2)
Strength: 32(+1)
Defense: 20
Speed: 37(+3)

Total SP: 123

TP left over: 3.5

Current cash: $445